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Once upon a time, Walter took Thor fetching on the sandbars
during winter.
On the fourth sandbar, the tide turned.
Eventually Walter asked, “Why are we out here, Thor?”
Thor barked, at Walter and through the fog towards shore.
Walter's gnarled hands patted his soaked jeans. Thor swam back
through the tidepool; Walter retrieved Thor's ball and followed.
The water, now to Walter's chest, stole his breath; seaweed
encumbered him.
On the third sandbar, Walter sat, huddled. "Where...?" Thor
barked and barked, he licked Walter's face and begged.
On the second sandbar, Walter turned back to sea. He accused Thor
of leading him astray. Thor got in Walter's way and barked
hoarsely.
A woman materialized behind them.
“Dad!” she cried. “Oh, Dad!”
Walter retreated. “Who are you?”
She took his hand.
Back home, Walter had a bath. Thor lay by the fire and watched
Eileen pace, whispering into the phone.
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